a Petrarchan sonnet
This age of industry does havoc wreak.
Back in the days of old, man could rely
On work to be the exercise whereby
His health could be maintained: of this I speak.
My job: computer and accounting geek.
With naught but brain and fingers I get by.
My brain spends hours with the bits and bytes;
My fingers work their forty hour week.
But this activity can't stimulate
My heart and lungs and muscles to expend
The energy that keeps my body fit.
So to the treadmill (I confess I hate)
I go, propelled by questions from my friend,
Like: "how long?" and "how far?" "Come now ... admit!"
Monday, March 06, 2006
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4 comments:
At least, unlike most other Americans you actually make time (as much as you hate it) to exercise even after a long tiring day at the office!
Nice poem and see I finally saw it AND commented!!!
Excellent work.
Well...Nice poetry. It has a nice quality to it.
I suppose the content was good, too. But being the sort of person I am, I'm more likely to notice style than actually meaning. (for shame)
Maybe you're too busy exercising (and besides that you can't rush art) but you should post more often. Heaven knows the fast food age needs more poetry.
Sarie
Thank you for your kind comment. Too busy exercising? At least that is one of the excuses I gave here.
I do hope to post more frequently on my main blog, as well as on my music and poetry blogs. And the encouragement of kind folks like you sure doesn't hurt the likelihood of that.
Again, thank you.
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